MERIT. Well done Josh on this assignment. You have covered all the work the assignment brief asked of you. You use lots of examples to support the points you make and some are really specific such as when discussing the Sony Xperia phone. However at other times your examples are just the link without reference to the content of the video, scenes, shots etc. Likewise some of your slides are briefly bullet pointed but you need to elaborate on these slides to improve your grade.
MERIT. Well done Josh on this assignment. You have covered all the work the assignment brief asked of you. You use lots of examples to support the points you make and some are really specific such as when discussing the Sony Xperia phone. However at other times your examples are just the link without reference to the content of the video, scenes, shots etc. Likewise some of your slides are briefly bullet pointed but you need to elaborate on these slides to improve your grade.
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